When browsing through the online articles for this task, I found a good article on Wikinews entitled “Explosions at Brussels airport and subway systems”, which was published on March 22, 2016. The headline of this article was simple and clear, and lead of this article included what, where, when, why, who and how which was good, but it still had several areas for improvements.
Firstly, the headline was not attractive enough. Maybe it can use serious or attractive words to appeal audiences, because a good headline decides wether readers want to continue read or not.
Secondly, the leading of this article was too long to read. In leading there had some useless information, such as some names.
Thirdly, there were too many quotes in this article and less of descriptions about the whole incident.
Fourthly, there need some shocking pictures to draw people’s attention.
It had several links about this incidents and social media links which had been provided to readers to share it, but there lack of interactions under this article.
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